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evening

Missing image
Evening Settles softly
Resting upon her shoulders
Radiant sunset

The horizon line
receded mixing time and fantasy
Painting sea and sky red


Author notes

kurgle adapted from tanka. photo mine

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  • individuality gold member
    April 16

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    a good piece of poetry, artistic elegance paints suns and seas as the dusk captures sighs on the horizon's swirl.


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Beautifully done!!!

    Such imagery this paints in the mind of the reader...
    Another fantastic piece...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • penman gold member
    December 3, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well written. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Topnotchsy
    December 3, 2008

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    That's an absolutely breathtaking picture, you clearly have talent with the camera as well as with the pen. Nice write and picture!


    • Draig aine gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      my humble thanks

      ah well yes the photo. I in a stunning spot, I do not have to do anything but loook out the window


  • rbruce gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Great photo to go with a great poem. I enjoy watching the evening settling softly, there is a magic about it.


  • Dark Otter
    November 29, 2008
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    What's a kurgle?

    You got my ear!


  • Simply Olivia
    November 25, 2008
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    Beautifully written

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