Darling,
Thank you.
Last night as we passionately
gave into each other,
senses that had been dormant;
came to life in me, again.
With each touch of your roving fingers
you sent chills beyond explanation
through every part of my body;
and with each slight movement,
my body thirsted for more.
The hunger roared within me
as our desires demanded intimacy.
Our parts pulsated with every passing second,
making our appetites lust in a frenzy;
and the moans that escaped me
made the world around us tremble.
Sleep well dear, rest easy in the sheets;
until we melt as one, again.
With Passions Burning,
Your Infatuate
Author notes
Ok... per solitarytear... "ass grass" (lol)
I looked and looked at the pic...and this poem.. is where it took me.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
A contest entry
- Quickie for the lady's of AP (adults only) by solitarytear.
400 points, ended November 28, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Congrats
Congrats Aimee on your win
Your entry deserved the gold.As I said before in my comment, you have written a most wonderful write and it was such a pleasure to read.I see much talent in you, so keep that quill moving
Much love and happiness,
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Thanks again!!
As long as my muse stays focused, the quill shall move!
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wow
this was an amazing pieces.......i loved how you took the prompt.......each line draws you in and the flow was brillent.......bravo and keep writing
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Awesome
Wow, this write is wonderfully written. It is seductive, and written with taste.You have provided the reader with excellent visuals and emotions felt.
Your write is soft and very loving, I have enjoyed the read very much, and I give my standing ovation to you, on such a well written poem.
These last few lines....
Sleep well dear, rest easy in the sheets;
until we melt as one, again.....
really sums up the poem and you have ended the write with so much love.
I wish you well in the contest my friend, and I think I will be comming back to you, to read more of your work, as I see much talent in your write.
Much love and happiness to you.
~Angel-anne~
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Thank you so very much for an awesome comment!! I'm glad that you enjoyed reading this one, I enjoyed writing it.
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The last two lines are what I would imagine most women *and likely men* truly long to hear.
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its a beautiful poem!
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