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short rhyme

I'm seeing angels with dandruff halos
screaming out to stop the chaos
I'm seeing fields of green and thinking selfishly

televangelists preaching through a broken screen

I'm hanging on by a string

the thread is breaking, and so is she

 

blinded by my own indiscretion

stifled by my hidden confessions

this isn't beauty or self expression

this is an unhealthy obsession

 

 

 

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  • heaven all alone
    November 28, 2008
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    This almost feels like...repression. Beautiful.


    • Beata
      November 28, 2008
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      I think it is repression, and I couldn't even realize it until you hit the nail on the head with that comment