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with a magnetic spell-------------

When you come like a spring
My garden like heart,  spreads fragrance

Your  beauty  tastes so sweet
and how can you expect me to resist?
your cheeks  ,  soft and smart like
rose flower's petals

You wave weaves of scintillating scent
with your smile
and entice whole  environment
with  magnetic spell--

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WELL...I Couldn't Resist

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Such beautiful imagery in this piece. Truly captivating.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene