Family is the foundation to life
it is what get you throught the day
it's the thing that you fall back to
it's the thing that matters the most in life.
Without family your only one person
you don't know the rule
the ediquet
the roots.
What do you do when your world beginst o crash
who do you talk to
who do you depend on
if not your family
then who?
Without the special people in life
life would not be life
take a second and think
family is life
without family there is no life
so think you are life
you would not be here without family
never forget
you'll never servive without life
Author notes
Sister
A contest entry
- Re-doing my Ap Family by Momma Cupcake.
400 points, ended December 2, 2008, 4 entries
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Comments
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there were errors but all in all very good.
i like your veiw on family.
^_^
good write -
There are a few spelling mistakes, and I feel that you repeat yourself a little much, but otherwise than that this has great meaning and I enjoyed it! Good luck!
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