It was the time, just after sunset
The blue in skies fading slow..
Fleeing to rest
hushing the stars to cast their glow,
Silvery curve of the moon at its crest..
I stood, gazing high..
There's this road straight and one to my right
I'll have to either turn or walk by
I could hear the breeze rustle a trite,
Birds chirping in reply..
Still gazing above, my thoughts rambling far
I took my steps as they asked me to..
That voice from within my heart,
I heard them well, yes, I heard them true;
Taking their places on the sky, those stars
Seemed to say, its the voice of the one who drew
The road I was destined to walk through..
Author notes
As subtle as I could..
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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that was fantastic
i thought it was spectacular keep up the good commenting
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thanks for replying it was my first time i hope you enjoy the stuff i do
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Beautiful
I love to read and feel at the same time and this write did that for me. It was beautiful! -
Straight from the Heart
Very nice, I can see
Right from the start.
This as a vision in my mind.
A true poets heart. -
Well Written
Many a path through ones life speaks of peaceful tranquility there is an inherent judgment to trust in of ourselves along this journey that’s makes our decisions all more foreseeable I love the complexity of this poem my heartfelt thank you.
Lady E
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Very eautiful, love star gazing.
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Hood Wink!
I wanted to say 'Amazing' when I reached the end but I saw the contest was for "Amaze me ..." and I didn't want you to think I was being a smart ass
This is an incredible poem, I am deeply into it and could happily read it again and again
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
(Apologies for late Hood-Wink!)
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Well written. The imagery in this piece is gorgeous. Your words have a calming effect, but also send a powerful message. Thank you for sharing.
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Yes.. indeed.. tried to make it as subtle as possible..
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