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Whats wrong with you

Is it something i said to you
or are you just miserable and alone
you don't share your feelings with me
i thought that we were friends

You said that i mattered to you
but I am the one that bleeds my pain
I'll be here for you still
I just want you to know

I told you I loved you
i don't say those words to just anyone
your a special lady
beautiful with such a laugh

I miss hearing your voice
and those late conversations
i hope all is well
and soon we talk

Author notes

Just a poem about a friend who is always complaining about her problems but never wants to hear about mine.

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  • sOuL
    January 29
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    this is a great poem..really nice

  • thegirlsafaultline.
    November 26, 2008
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    Nice

    I know how you feel.


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    WONDERFUL REACHING OUT!!!

    I know how you must feel, in my past people have done the same thing to me and in some ways I do to them also. One tends to get all wrapped up in their own problems they forget to listen to their friends hurts. I do catch myself doing it and stop and listen to my friends and stay quiet until they are done and then try to concentrate on helping them.'s

  • The tie guy
    November 25, 2008
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    Well written

    Really expresses the depth of your feelings!!