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Truth


The heavens cracked and down she fell

Holding the truth inside her shell

Even a part of God went down
She said to much for him to take
In spite of all the love they made
Now she would have to stand alone
Opening dimensions of fathers home
For now she learned they are the same
Once joined together they'd still remain
Never doubting the powers that be
Every part of you was born in me
Inside her heart a millennium passed

Still searching herself inside the dark

The cosmic clock that father made

Has held her here just like a slave

Engulfed by fear of things unknown

She grew a flame and called it home

It's here she sits and contemplates

Never knowing about her mistakes

Only wishing she could learn the truth

First fallen angel of heavens fruits

And now she sits upon the rock

Looking back to what she has lost

Longing to be back amongst Gods flock

 

 

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    December 8, 2008

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    A great flowing piece and an enjoyable read, Thankyou for entering my contest.
    All the best


  • RareFlower
    December 8, 2008
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    Loved it. Great write. Good luck in the contest