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A rose to remind me of your touch
And know it means so very much
As every petal tells a story
Of all the love and all the glory
My fingers touch your empty heart
Unspoken words of who thou art
Trembling pulses make me shiver
As down towards my soul they quiver
Don’t hurry now, relax and sigh
You know you need this as do I
Ecstasy will bring you pleasure
As our emotions rise together
I will fill those empty spaces
And take you to exotic places
Emotions will be soaring high
You and I will reach the sky
Tumbling softly to the ground
Then up again in feelings found
Ebbing from our secret places
While taking joy from our embraces
When all emotions have been sought
And both have all the pleasure caught
We lay us back and feel the peace
Oh! what wonder, what release
Now silently we lay and ponder
Feeling calm and feeling wonder
If only life could be this fine
And we could feel this all the time
The rose left now will bring me pleasure
As memories my heart will treasure
I gaze upon it silently
Symbolic of love from you to me
Jenny Lloyd
Author notes
Contest Roses
I tried to copy and paste a picture of a red rose here but it didn't work. Hence the not very good substitute.
A contest entry
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400 points, ended November 28, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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Thanks for entering the contest! It was a very beautiful poem!
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You are an amazing poet x Your words gripped me xx Thank you so much for your entry xx good luck xx
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beautiful
Hi Jenny,
This is a wonderful and most beautiful take on the picture prompt. You spoke of love, desires,and dedication.The story behind this picture is told well with excellent visuals and emotions, woven within your write.The poem flowed well and was very soft and seductive.I wish you all the best in the contest.
Much love and happiness to you.
~Angel-anne~
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