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~ When Heaven Calls~



 
Swept up in emotions feeling
every pulsing emotion tears tumble.

Heartache stabs and fog rolls as
daylight fades.

Waking and knowing the Brother
you loved is no longer living within
mortal flesh.

Day's pass reality seeps,
comfort comes knowing within
your heart his spirit dwells.

And you will see him again when
Heaven calls.







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In Memory of My Brother Richard
Nov 04, 1965 - Nov 13 2008

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  • X-Elmo-X
    January 30
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    this is a very emotional poem
    i loved reading it
    thanks for sharing

  • -lk-
    December 27, 2008
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    Is is so hard when we we lose a loved one. Each word here speaks of how dearly he is missed and what a special place he holds in your heart. Our only comfort is in knowing that we will be reunited again when "Heaven Calls"

    Thank you for sharing your heart in this lovely dedication. Always an emotional experience reading your verse.


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 15, 2008

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    Such a heartfelt and moving tribute to a dear loved one. His memory will live on through your words and in your heart. Thanks for sharing this.


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    A very loving and heart touching tribute to your dear brother. Comfort indeed comes from knowing he's with you alsways in your heart. My deepest condolenses, tender

    May the memory of this smile always light your path dear.

    prayers and blessings for brighter tomorrows,
    Sandi


  • Malabu
    November 27, 2008

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    your heart speaks truly what is important to remember... it dose not falter the love imprinted inside you...he lives in the spirit... of heaven

    mal


  • Sandygram
    November 27, 2008

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    So Beautiful and Heartfelt

    I am so sorry for your loss Tearz. No words can make it easier when our loved ones are called home. They are trulely the lucky ones though to be with the Heavenly Father and in eternal paradise awaiting us. He is still in your heart. Feel him with each heartbeat. Bless you this day. Hugs and Smiles.

    Sandy .


  • Samplette gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    Oh sweetie, I am so sorry for your loss. This is such a painful piece of poetry. Beautifully written from the heart, but so sad. I lift you up to our precious Lord and pray He comforts you and your family.
    Sam


  • JaydensNanas
    November 25, 2008

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    A beautiful tribute

    Sooooo beautiful my dear friend! I'm so sorry to hear though that you have lost a brother, so sad....your family and you are in my prayers~

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    November 25, 2008

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    Richard is smiling down from Heaven

    Such a lovely remembrance. He is sending you love, hugs and memories and wishes you to stay strong.

    Lady Dragonwyck


  • PureUA
    November 25, 2008

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    This is a beautiful write. Anyone can write about life lost, but it's when it's real and is true emotion it becomes a work of art.

    It pushed me to empathize, which is something everyone needs.

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