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Light of Love



Cellulous and light
in balance of definition
as the waters of life
create beauty in transition

In a perfect balance
nature strikes a bloom
born of leaf and stem
for the sun to groom

Petals of sweet fragrance
addressed by bumblebee
flow into the spring breeze
to fall upon you and me

From the tiger of a lady
to the Susan of brown eye
in all of the magic wonders
to be born beneath the sky

A simple pebble in a pond
moves the lily of the water
the one who’s attention I caught
in all my endeavors to flatter





























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  • Topaze
    December 9, 2008
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    Words are lost in the wind, when no one listens?


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    This is so soft and beautiful. Your words can paint a wonderful picture. This is an awesome poem.

    Joann

    • Topaze
      November 25, 2008
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      It is all for you my love, my little baby dove.


  • Cannonsfire
    November 25, 2008
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    Lovely entry here for the word prompt, thank you C

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