His warmth touches me
as delicately as anything
I have ever known.
He loves me
as any father would
love his child.
He guides me
with his ultimate
wisdom in all things.
He is my inspiration
to be better than I
already am.
His touch,
His wisdom,
His love
is what I need.
Author notes
word prompt is delicate The picture came from deviantart.com and is titled Heaven's touch.
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Comments
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Wow, very nicely done.
Wonderful job with this piece, I love the strong simplicity here.
Bravo!!!
♥ kate -
nice i cant believe this
its to hard to judge and it was worth everything thats what i spent i had 400 credits -
You have done well with a "delicate" and deft touch. Your poetry has moved my heart.
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Just beautiful sweetie.. It makes me feel warm and joyful.. Thank you so much..
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so very beautiful and filled with such warmth and love. Sighs-
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wow.. beautiful work here.. such a lovely portrayal of god.... a very moving and well written piece!
Thanks for entering.. and best of luck in my contest!
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This is SO peaceful to read;
You took a wonderful prompt from that picture inspiration, and I love the way that you didn't go overboard with writing this -
instead keeping it short and concise, and immensely touching!
Thanks for entering
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That's beautiful! I'm not sure i completely understand it but if I have then it portrays an adoring relationship between father and daughter. I'm slightly jealous
Very moving. Well done 
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The HE is God... and I am referring to a persons relationship with HIM. The title of the picture is Heavens touch. Thanks for commenting.
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A beautiful "delicate" write. Very spiritual, but not overbearing! Nice! I thank you for entering my humble contest. It's always a pleasure to read a favorite's work
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this is simple and beautiful
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this is sweet...
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Sounds like someone you adore and it shows through this
C
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