We sat composing,
rendering our song a melody,
verses laid on choruses,
lines to rhyme your desires.
The harmony echoed
splendidly,
Until we crooned the bridge
when notes turned discord…
Author notes
Prompt: BRIDGE - My way of looking at "Bridge"
A contest entry
- Word Prompt Quickie by Polaja.
1200 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful take on your given prompt mate... wish you luck in the contest. enjoyed the read immensely


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This is an original take on the prompt
I really like the way that you set this poem up - the musical imagery was very well crafted and I enjoyed the read 
Thank you for entering
Polly



