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Our Song

We sat composing,
rendering our song a melody,
verses laid on choruses,
lines to rhyme your desires.

The harmony echoed
splendidly,
Until we crooned the bridge
when notes turned discord…

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Prompt: BRIDGE - My way of looking at "Bridge"

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  • poppa
    November 28, 2008

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    Wonderful take on your given prompt mate... wish you luck in the contest. enjoyed the read immensely


  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 26, 2008

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    This is an original take on the prompt I really like the way that you set this poem up - the musical imagery was very well crafted and I enjoyed the read

    Thank you for entering

    Polly