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the Bridge



a structured span

a connection

leading to common ground

the path of discordant minds

diverse yet flexible

ultimate passage to understanding,

intellectual communion

and harmony


words










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Prompt: Bridge
Between 20 and 30 words of quality


word count = 26

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    December 27, 2008

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    Bravo!

    Love this take on the prompt. Yes, words used effectively can definitely be bridges, they can also make everything collapse! I like building bridges as I know you do also! Nice work here Dennis.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    December 19, 2008

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    I think this is more effective then most. It shows compromise. So often found in life, which is important when you do not wish to lose.

    Shari


  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 26, 2008

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    I really like the take on the prompt here the idea of words as the bridge to communication is well expressed in your words - and I like the use of the word "discordant"

    Thank you for entering

    Polly


  • earthstar
    November 25, 2008

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    I love the comparison of words here. I would not thought of such a write. I love the bridge of words. this is very good. thanks for being my bridge of support and reading my work. I have so many things to get caught up on. have a great day