as the sun set over bosphorus
shadows said goodbye
walked away
we didn't say a word
just stood there
and let the wind
howl
Author notes
prompt: bridge
A contest entry
- Word Prompt Quickie by Polaja.
1200 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
a bridge doesn't always connect
Comments
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And another one! Hahaha! You are a gold trophy hogger!
Amazing take on the prompt. Do you know how amazing you are?! Well, you are friggin' bloody amazing!!!!!!
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Deep and sad in so few words...excellent imagery and hard reality to an end.
Congrat's on another Gold! Well done.
mystic
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Lovely, lovely, lovely!
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cograts, great imagery
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Oh my! This has such an empty feel to it and yes it is truly stunning, as I knew it would be.
Brilliant!
All the best with this
Gaylene
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I can see why this poem would make others feel inadequate - this is stunning 
I really love the soft voice that you use in the telling of this story, and the way that you create an atmosphere of unanswered questions beautifully done!
Thank you for entering
Polly
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Amazing.
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Oh mymy... You are very good!
I am looking forward to getting to know your talent even more.
Delila
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Your poetry is starting to make me feel inadequate. This is wonderfully well written!
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