Ya look back,
its kinda sad,
Maybe happiness came then went.
Ya look back ,
the years flew,
Age never stopping by ,to spare a little more time.
Ya start to look forward,
there is a light shining,
as you say, unfurling.
Ya start to see,
pretty things in beautiful people
loving you in the way you deserve.
Author notes
No 3- Reminiscing only blinds the future
A contest entry
- Inviting my Favorites by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
875 points, ended December 10, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aw thank you for your wonderful entry Abe
Your words touched me very much
Best wishes and keep on penning
Julie
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a beautiful take onthe promt you have painted a greatness with your words good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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Abe! Nicey nice! loved your take on the prompt. I want to enter Julie's contest too! But, sigh, a bad writer's block atm and you know how I love all my entries for her to be perfect
Haha. This one was just that! I love the way you write! Good luck love
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Nice
wonderful view of the future Abe. Seeing the good in a hard world. A mighty fine write poet. kep them coming.
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