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Four Seasons ( Silver )

Fourth the seasons turning,

wealth of colours painted the bleak,

lost in winter solstice,

forever shall we dream.

 

Serene spring days we wander through,

in meadows full of daffodils

poppies red, daisy chains were link.

 

Summer picnics,

wicker baskets laid on a blanket,

dipping strawberries into chilled champagne.

 

Autumnal beauty,

leafy litter coppers crimson

spiralled by the chilled October winds.

 

Now we sit beside the glow of a logged fire,

listening to the crackle,

watching the flames dancing their flickered waltz,

as we toast in the New Year, just us...

 


 

 

 

 

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  • Alyzeh
    December 3, 2008

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    Loved the imagery here Julie. Good luck in the contest, for this write, you certainly dont need it. But oh well. Good luck anyway.

    Love
    Alyzeh


  • chilali
    November 28, 2008
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    Wow. I am just speechless!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Wow, you have captured the seasons beautifully sis! Love the imagery and the warmth of the last verse especially! Nothing better than being snug in front of a log fire Gorgeous write, good luck


  • maralisa silver member
    November 26, 2008

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    ah wow a deligthful poem I love your descriptive imagery its beautiful hun good luck inthe contest my friend take care maralisa


  • daviscth silver member
    November 25, 2008

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    Oh sis, I just love the imagery in this. Your words are so beautiful. Good luck in the contest dear.


  • Topaze gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    That was absolutely beautiful, my, my, my best wishes.


  • seclusion
    November 25, 2008

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    This IS A HORRIBLE POEM!!!! YOU FAILLLL AT LIFEEEE!!!!


    Just kidding
    Looking forward to seeing your entry

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