building bridges;
across banks facile,
while all engineering known;
connecting hearts
sewing with love,
keeping them together,
a great human venture,
as pinching word punctures balloon
impossible to close afterwords.
Author notes
Bridge
Between 20 and 30 words of quality
A contest entry
- Word Prompt Quickie by Polaja.
1200 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked the sewing of hearts and the pinching words - very nicely crafted imagery in this piece
the take on the prompt was well done and I enjoyed the read
Thank you for entering
Polly
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Very Good!
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a brilliant poem dad good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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