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Think You See It All?

There are mountains and seas but that's not all,
there are romantic places with snow that will fall,
and people who are so special every time when you call,
have you seen golden roses when the world turns you down?
no you have not neither have you been depressed wearing a crown,
neither have you seen the secrets about this mysterious life,
you need to keep special things when the world cuts like a knife,
when what you see is an illusion,
you need to be with a soul that keeps you from the confusion,
there are supernatural events that are magical,
like someone that keeps you from events that are tragical,
come outside from the room that you are in,
and you will see other colors as a different thing,
and you will understand that no one has a clue to who they are,
but you can get what you always have wished so far,
you know it because you imagine eyes like shinning stars.

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  • ratkos
    November 26, 2008
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    always forget these


    • divineboy21
      November 26, 2008
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      forget what?

      thankz for the comments its nice of you, and you are incredible,
      Jnnie.


  • ratkos
    November 26, 2008

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    this is so inspirational and beautiful! i know my little sister is gonna love this.beautifully penned..jennifer


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    I like the rhyming words, they are nice. This is a great piece.
    Thanks for entering and good luck!

    becca