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Bridge

Bridge connects two banks
Allows upon it tourists and monks
Also students and traders
But it doesn't block invaders.
Nice if bridge of trust, constructed
Make sure, it is protected.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 26, 2008

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    This has an interesting flow to it, the rhyme is subtle though - which made it smoother I like the sentiment of the last two lines - very true and well expressed

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    Polly