Little bird flying within the hands of spring.
Full of life with an upbeat heart.
Tickles the colors with a beautiful scent.
Bringing happy bridges to the end.
With a rare attitude.
missed by understanding.
released from the dream.
resolved shy eyes with a kinky smile.
dressing good the tune of a rebel.
but taking the eyes of who doesnt need to see.
Inside is the intensity of the color red.
charms the fire with a delicate stare.
went away with peace in her hands.
and a fully loaded blast of curiosity.
intrigues the ones who walks besides.
Author notes
I really had alot of fun writting this one
just letted flow, I hope you enjoy it.
Please comment.
Keep the good read and good luck.
A contest entry
- Write a Poem to Me by Girl-Interrupted.
500 points, ended December 8, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the play on words. Theres are so many creative phrases in this piece. My ultra fav would be this...."With a rare attitude.
missed by understanding.
released from the dream.
resolved shy eyes with a kinky smile.
dressing good the tune of a rebel.
but taking the eyes of who doesnt need to see."
Your creative mind flowed!
Thanks so much for entering! Best of luck to ya!
becca
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