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Kama Sutra Jazz








my heart,
a blood flute

beneath your rhythm section thighs



a composition of skin,

we thrum

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    September 16

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    I agree with everything Adrian said about this poem, Danny...except it's also what poetry lays down for. What a wonderful piece of beautiful brevity. How very sensual, in so few lines. But then, you never really have to speak at all, do you, my Love? ♥



  • insideinsanity
    December 8, 2008
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    Lovely, vivascious.

    Simply, and artistically, beautiful.


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    November 30, 2008

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    Lovely in the most simplistic of terms. Erotic and quiet. Somehow, the lack of capitalization and punctuation adds a deep level to this poem. Just...silently beautiful.


  • lunarlunacy
    November 25, 2008

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    succint and incredibly poignant. erotic, slightly dark, profound.. everything good poetry stands for.