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Shadows.

Shadows have been around me all my life.
Whether the shadows belong to people
Or people's minds,
Its all the same --
They have always been there.
I have never adjusted to the fear of facing it alone,
Which is the way it has been for as far back as I can remember.
I have been alone.
The shadows surround and embrace me.
My soul remembers;
My soul remembers the shadows.

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Just a series of thoughts I wrote down one day before I went to sleep.

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  • CrazyAGoGo
    November 25, 2008

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    Love it!

    I love your art piece that goes with this particular poem. From the first time I saw this poem, I thought, "Wow, she's such a great poet!" Because.. well; you know you are already... I don't think I have to go over the details on that one!!

    Also, the only thing I don't really like about this poem: TOO SHORT!! Make'em longer. But.. eh, your poems are short/sweet/to the point, so it's really nothing. I have a short attention span anyway. Heh!! LOVE IT.


    • uneternal
      November 25, 2008

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      Thanks! ^^ And yeah, I know. A lot of these are to short. I'd add onto it but I like to keep the originals so. XD I will definitely add more onto my newer ones. Thanks again though!


      • CrazyAGoGo
        November 25, 2008
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        Anytime!

        I like to keep originals, too. Something about keeping it in its original glory.. preserves the emotions for me. Your poetry inspires me. OMG. LOVEEEEE. You're welcome, btw.