The razor slices tender skin
I just can't let go of it
I feel the pain
I see the blood
But yet there is a certain high
That comes from this
This suicidal
And crazy
Habit that I have
I truly want to stop
But once I get started
I just can't
Author notes
im just really sad rite now and i just need a chance to let emotions out..... it may not say much but its one in the morning and im losing it...
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Comments
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This is amazing. I am guessing your self harm is a way to vent your anger. Unfortunatly this does not help in the long run (or so iv been told) i mean i self harm too so i know how it helps releve those feelings. I hope that you find the strength to one day stop your cutting.
I am alwasy here if you ever need to talk or need someone who understands what your going though.
The flow of this poem is brilliant and your words are so powerful.
Thank you for entering my contest and remember i am always here if you need me
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I can relate to your poem and i am sure many others can to i have the same problem i want to stop as well its been 3 weeks and counting since the last time we can stop together
s if you ever need a friend to talk to you i am here i don't yell or throw a fit i simply want to be someone who you can talk to cutting is an addiction that i hope we both can stop for good i know how it feels to pick that razer up and want to keep on doing it but we can't we are better then the razor we control our minds not the knife or the razor or anything else we might do it with i feel for you and i hope we can be friends and work though this together thank you for sharing your heart and your secrets with me s
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One part of healing is to share your pain with someone.
Keep well Sweety!
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