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You Don't Know

You don't know how you make me feel.
I know it's something I shoudn't feel but I do.

It's something that just won't leave me alone.
It's something that just keeps knocking at my door.

You don't know what my body does when my eyes first meet your glance.
I know it's something that shouldn't happen but it does and I can't control it.

It's something that just won't leve me alone.
It's something that keeps my hopes up.

You don't know how it feels to know that I'm not the one your looking for.
I know it's something I should feel but It's there and it's not going away.

It's something that just won't leave me alone.
It's something that visits me in my sleep

You don't know how if feels to know that I will never get that kiss.
I know it's something that shouldn't happen but it's here and I have to let it go

I have to let the thought of you with me slip away.
I have to let the thought of me being with you slip away.
I have to let the thought of being able to call you my man slip away.
I have to let the thought of just knowing that you love me slip away.

These are thoughts that I thought would come true but as it turns out I must say goodbye to the dream that will never come true.

What is it you like and don't like... be honest I might be able to write a better one!

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  • irish17crazy
    June 10

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    very well written! I once had a dream too that I never thought was attainable...with not nearly as much hope or thought because I just figured it would and could never happen. I happily learned otherwise ...you never know! very well done!


  • Tadd
    November 25, 2008
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    well writen,
    realy good.


    • Dont Lose THE ONE
      November 25, 2008
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      Thanxz! I just wrote it like last night at like 1 in the morning. Lol. Glad you liked it

      Much Love

      Taya