You read me like no other.
But you do not see
what every one else does.
For inside of me I am torn.
Like a used paper, waiting to be tossed.
I am here for your scribbles...
Your hurtful words...
Your tiresome treatment.
Every one asks....
When will this stop?
when will I mend what seems will never heal?
And all I can say is....
I do not know.
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picture credit: http://resqben.deviantart.com/art/Torn-7728373
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspired, :) by ForgottenMemories.
400 points, ended January 28, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
whispering in your ear
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an interesting take of this picture is what I see here and have to admire
I myself wrote a poem inspired by this very picture and yet it amazes me how we both had a different image portrayed in our mind to write about.
I enjoyed your write, it was unique and had a strong ending.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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image doesnt really work for me. May i have another?
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thanks
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