Waterfalls and Sunshine falling in rays
Not impressed with palm tree dreams
I'm still waiting for Winter's beam
Snowflakes skating in my mind...
Dreams falling apart all around
No place set in life or World
Hope dissolved into ice shaves
Ambition still carries through...
In my veins it runs, it burns
My flesh eaten up by dreams
Tears melt away the pain
It helps to know that Hope
Hope still Rains invisible
Sweet desires of Love
Success calls out to me
Winter has forsaken routine.
Author notes
Quite a bit different from what I normally write....
I do not usually do Abstract at all...
I hope this piece is to your liking.
A contest entry
- In Your Head by Candyknife.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Here my mind shifts. The winter comes but so then does the thaw. My mind, never one to slow in the cold, runs rampantly through the world of dreams. What shall be seen on morrow?
I liked this one very much. "Hope still rains invisible,Sweet desires of love." Bravo my friend Bravo.
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Thank you! ^-^
I thought you would really like this one. in an odd way it gives a feel, a sense of hope. XD I like that. Hence why I was reading through my stuff....hehe and stopped at this.
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Touching and beautiful too at the same, because of your hope, the strength of your heart inside...
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This is so filled with winter images, and that seems appropriate for the way the mind works in its dormant period. This is a meditation in itself. I enjoyed reading this!
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THANKS!
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very nice
i loved the imagery, as if a person just going bout life as it dishes it out
nothing realy keeping you here, but not too closed minded to notice the good times around you
very deep and thought provoking
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Thank you so much for the BRONZE!
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