So many miles seperate us
And I feel foolish to miss you
Cause I've never had you
And yet
You steal my breath
A feeling of stupidity
Washes through me
Because I want you so badly
And yet
I cant help but to need you
My body heats up
Just at the thought of you
I always dream you were here
And yet
I'm afraid to have you near
I cherish the little we have
But I crave more
I wish you were beside me
And yet
With the little that we have
Can it be anything more?
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loveaswellashate
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Wow...
I'm not sure what to say...I know how you feel...but ...i shouldn't i feel bad...who is this about? -
love the repetition of the words "and yet" and my favorite part is the ending. "With the little that we have.
can it be anything more?" it just makes me stop and think: 'wait a minute...'
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