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You Cannot Win, in Love and War.

Love, why must you temp me so?
My oceans build and tides regress
but my love's secure inside me.

Your feel of bliss makes me whole,
but the Walls; they are between us.
When talking pain; War's empathy.

In War and Love. To Lose; is gain.
In Love and War. To Win's a dream--


and I do!




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