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Random minds

My mind is random,

A vessel of sorts,

You want to know whats on it?

Then heres the report.

 

Jungle, monkeys,

Hair, shampoo,

Mustache , Hitler,

Everything Taboo,

 

Tatoo's, flesh,

Bamboo sticks,

Houses, walls,

Clay and bricks,

 

The earth, water,

Humans, war,

Gun's, planes,

Tanks, C4,

 

Fire, Neanderthal,

Evolution, God,

Power, lightening,

A long metal rod,

 

That's what I'm thinking,

That's whats on my mind,

Am I being smart?

Well I think you will find,

 

The human mind does this,

Quite simply you'll find.

Remember that if you ask me,

What's on my mind.

Author notes

This is acturally what was going though my mind when I was writing this poem, if you check everything that is on either side of each object or word has something, though sometimes very slight, to do with eachother... Try and work it out

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  • Sketchin
    November 28, 2008
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    I really dig the flow in this piece, nice work....


  • BloodWhiteOleander
    November 25, 2008
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    good

    i like it. its interesting has a nice flow.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    WOW!

    Kinda like an attic, or a basement, full of things that got tucked away, and then tumble around when you step off the stairs! This is great!


  • Candyknife gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    haha

    i loved this !
    the flow, and ryhme were very nice
    kinda had me reading it to a beat in my head
    good job thanks for entering