daughter's fingernails
are long emerged
churning continuous
meal's minerals
succulently
~
A contest entry
- In 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
Comments
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truly creative and extremely thought provoking... x
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Gypsy Butterfly gutsy is what it felt to me but also sure
thanks for qualitatively looking at this
beautiful image to work with,
called Carikyn
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wow...this is very unique...great take on the prompt
Good luck
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CathrynnAnn thanks for coming round with opened eyes
this was thrillably challenging, when I could find that image remindful for me in meaningful means...
you cheered me clearly without off colored smiley face, but you might've missed I asked to not have connotation of good luck either that can get vaguely driven --
called Carolyn
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Totally off the wall... creative and thought provoking... Well done.
Ken
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Ken I'm glad I didn't completely climb overboard...
thanks for a summary that judge likes to indicate. it was fun to have supporting perspective for just a poem.
I treasure enthusiasm enough to ask applause symbols of halfish images be kept aside haha,
called Carolyn
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Very twisted and interesting. I loved the darkness and frustration in this piece.
Carrie
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Carrie dear reader
I had hoped I hadn't abstracted my excitement for a raced write too much. It could be borderline for "frustration" expressed as I'm just beginning to treasure the health signs that don't have to be gimmicks if not merely with gimme hunger -- but patience drips ripened or soaked methods until handling complex goodness...
thanks again for feedback, with input from your personality's notice more than emoticons of general concealment even ~
called Carolyn
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