Arbitrary tempest of an
azure orb, destroys serenity.
Perfection, ameliorated.
Author notes
Short piece I wrote for another contest (photo prompt). Photo from the prompt can be found at: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2428333
A contest entry
- In 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry Hodgepodge by DolceVito.
875 points, ended November 30, 2008, 25 entries
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Thank you for entering this short but powerful write.
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intriguingly engaging... x
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i love the word ameliorated, i always try to throw it into my class essays lol.
-- belencia
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Very nice... a wonderful interpretation... Well done and best of luck.
Ken -
Very nice... a wonderful interpretation... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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brilliant write! I like the idea of a random "drop" disrupting "serentity" and "perfection", yet improving upon it.
Good luck
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