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kiss

here we are
a moment
seize it
with a kiss

A contest entry

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    a nice snapshot moment, thanks for entering


  • iamlost gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Short and strong, I love every word, especially the power in "seize", and image you've created in this moment you've captured with your words if nothing else. Beautiful.
    Well penned,
    ~lost


  • Cricket baby
    December 5, 2008

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    a shorter poem with very little words can have such a very large impact and you grasped that perfectly.. =) beautiul, absolutely beautiful


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 26, 2008
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    lovely... x


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    great take on the prompt "a moment; seize it; with a kiss" lovely

    Good luck


  • McRae by nature
    November 24, 2008
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    Very nice piece, gentle but still powerful.

    Carrie


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 24, 2008
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    Lovely and so impactful- good luck to you in the contest

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