my love
from above
I need to explain
why I felt the pain
I need to have you near
so I could be without fear
I thought I had lost you forever
thought we'd never be together
now I can see that all I did was learn,
that now I could finally have my turn
I'll explain right now, you must know,
this is what I felt through that short time ago
I didn't understand who I was 'til I met you,
it was hard to think you might not love me too
So I hid all of my feelings, let you walk away,
wishing I could have asked you to stay
went seperate ways, far from each other,
I kept moving on 'til I'd fallen for another
I knew nothing would change how it felt,
when I thought of you, I began to melt
I had to pull myself together, just smile,
hoping no one could see my denial
somehow there was a missing part,
somewhere deep down in my heart
I knew only one thing could fill it,
snug like only a puzzle piece fit
I hid all emotions behind a mask,
soon it became an easy task
no need to pretend anymore,
soon it became a total bore
that is when you told me,
and now I could see
that i can be happy,
no longer sappy
'til we get old,
mine to hold
and forever,
together
true to,
you
and be
me
Author notes
It originally shapes like a heart but the way the site puts the words I can't keep the heart shape that is why some lines are much longer than others.
soccertwin91
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interesting. Sort of looks like half a heart to me. Not perfect true but then what ever is. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into this contest.
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Sweet!
its not weird !
i loved it !
very nice poem very well written, i like the shape of it too.... told a very good story in a Rhyme and i like rhyming poems....
Great Write !
oh i'm the first one to comment
v
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