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Stealthy Eye

 

 

 

 

 

Aquatic eye 

 

observing

 

feeling

 

moving stealthily

 

upstream

 

to capture

 

 

 

 

...you 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

10 Words
Picture By Ezra Klein

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A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 26, 2008
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    creatively drawn... x


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 24, 2008

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    interesting poem, i like the flow and it kind of has this feel to it, well i guess like water, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • KayJay
    November 24, 2008

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    What a creative approach! I love the image you've created. Superbly crafted with just 10 words.
    Ken


  • McRae by nature
    November 24, 2008

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    Loved the feeling of the chase. "Capture you" very powerful.

    Carrie


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    great take on the prompt...this is very unique...and I love it

    good luck !

  • piccola silver member
    November 24, 2008
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    This is a great write. So few words and the ending is very climatic. Good job, I enjoyed the write.

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