Magical elusive, fluid,
aqua, a spirit bursting
graceful from within
A contest entry
- In 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, what's your opinion of this?
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Ten wonderful wolds here from a wonderous poet!
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very descriptive.... x
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suggestion: graceful to grace?
descriptive yet consise
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Pretty take on the picture! well done dear Judith!
All the best!
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Creative way to approach this.. I really like the spirtual aspects you've drawn on... Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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I like how you described the power coming from within. Very beautiful.
Carrie
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"a spirit bursting" lovely write
Good luck
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