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[ bound by chains made of lies, your to be exact. ]

bound by chains made of lies, your to be exact.
breaking free, nothing but my pride intact.
you were there to catch me when i fell,
i was falling for you and you could tell.
there's nothing left between us, no love.
but i found out what my dreams were made of.

lies, there all you gave me,
stress, that's all that came from being around you.
now, i wish he'd save me,
but i don't want him to be the same as you.

i turned my life around, for the better.
left you behind, no longer your debtor.
i don't miss you now, hope i never do.
i loved you, and my love only grew.
i'm done, i've tired of this,
i'm gone, and you've been dismissed.

i grew, emotionally.
wish i could say the same for you
you can't change the past,
i can't tell you what to do.

i left, i had my reasons.
your lies, your treason.
i thought it was you i needed,
we always fought, i always pleaded.
i wanted you to stay,
but that was before i was betrayed.

i don't love you the same,
feel like my hate was your aim

any advice?

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  • sweetfire
    December 13, 2008
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    i agree with dana but my fav is definatly the first verse. amazing.


  • StarCrossedOut
    November 25, 2008

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    I really lyk it dearie.
    "i left, i had my reasons.
    your lies, your treason.
    I thought it was you you i needed,
    we always fought, i always pleaded"
    That's my favorite.