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not love

what i felt for him was
a strange feeling to me
he was my everything
the reason i didn't
over dose
the light in my life
the one i could count on
always.

but it wasn't love because
when i saw you
my heart stoped and
the butterflies flew
you pulled me out of the dark
you're always there for me
no matter what
so now i know what i felt then
was not love because
i found love with u

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