One thing
leads to another.
A single drop makes waves.
A contest entry
- In 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments are much appreciated :)
Comments
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cleverly portrayed... x
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Awesome ^_^
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Forgot clappies, hecka sorry!


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Wow.
Totally speechless (though my fingers aren't).
This is amazing.
Great meaning, too... most of my poems are a mumble of words trying to fit themselves together, but usually they're like mismatched puzzle pieces... this is just awesome. Nothing is insignificant; everything, even those that are ephemeral, has its place.
No idea why you didn't win anything in the contest... seriously.
Oh... it's closed for judging, didn't see that... hope you come out with a trophy! -
Very neat. I like how you took this picture and used a more original form of the butterfly effect

Carrie

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great take on the prompt. small, insignifigant thing can create a mighty wave! nice metaphor
Good luck
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Wow... what a great interpretation of the prompt. Wonderfully done!
Ken

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Great title, and wonderful write. Best wishes!


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