Even
the sea
began as a
single drop like me...
Author notes
prompt pic 10 words
In a list
A contest entry
- In 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 26, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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your so few words say sooooo much,
wow, i wish i had this ability.
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Amazing.
I think it's difficult to make a powerful message
with a very short word restriction.
You did a superb job here. It seems both optimistic and pessimistic. Thanks for sharing
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profoundly beautiful... x
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oohhh
it's short and profound!!!
i like it, feels small but powerful!
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hmmm ... yeah .... like this concept ... i could take that somewhere else ... and i just might ... good luck in the contest!!!
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Wow, I like the how this is written. It is like ants, in a group, they make an impression, but a single ant is unnoticeable. Great.
Carrie
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Oh, this is very creative...great take on the prompt
good luck
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Unique... causes one to stop and think... I love the poem...hate to think
Best of luck.
Ken
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I love the optimism in this! (at least, that's what I'm assuming that is) And my review is now twice as long as your poem . . . But I liked it. Profound in a simple way.
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