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Fade Out Love

Come on let me tell you how it's going to be
If you've got some lovin' then give it all to me
I ain't fussy and I ain't blind
Let this fade out love shine, baby shine
Oh, yeh! Let it shine, baby shine

Now, my love is bigger than an old Mack truck
Just a rollin' and a reelin' 'til you get stuck
So show me now how much your love is true
And I'll show you some lovin' that'll stick like glue
Let this fade out love shine, baby shine
Oh, yeh! Let it shine, baby shine

So let me tell you how it's now going to be
Just beg for mercy while down on your knees
I'll give you lovin' so come and take your fill
Don't waste a drop of it, don't let it spill
An' let this fade out love shine, baby shine
Oh, yeh! Let it shine, baby shine
Don't let it fade out anymore
Don't let it fade out right out the door...

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  • SuZyCuE
    November 25, 2008

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    As lyrics I can almost hear this song in my head and thats very good, its a little dark but I supoose Love is all those things. Maybe try giving it a little light You have a great work in progress here lets see where you can take it.