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sm...Time To Die

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What a nightmare, to be alone

On a day of celebration without your love

My soul-mate died, left me alone

God called him, to the sky above

 

It wasn't fair, I couldn't go with him

I was left behind, to fight this life

He escaped all the pressures and pain

And all of the mental strife

 

I want to die too, and go with him

Be free from all this hassles today

Why must I be struck alone

Release me too, so I can go away

 

We could be together again

Over the clouds and stars above

It wouldn't be a terrible day

If we could meet and share our love

 

All I want is a reunion

With my soul-mate in the sky

I can't stand this time alone

Tell me it's my time to die

                         

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  • Papagallo
    December 30, 2008

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    Your words are so sad and so true for anyone who has loss their love. I am selfish a sI wish to go before my wife. She is stronger and will survive without me. Your words are beautiful. May you find peace again.

    • amysticwriter silver member
      December 30, 2008
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      Thanks for your consoling words, I thought I was strong too, but learned very quick how dependent I was on Linzy...he has been gone since 9/03, and I still fumble through things we shared...We both loved working outdoors, only a wink away from each other...I feel close to him when I am in the yard, but I just don't have the enthusiam, I had with him near...It's really hard when I prune his muscadine vines, he had a love for the beauty and the productivity of all growing fruits and veggies...I always did the landscaping...we always seem to be on the same wave-length...true soulmates...Mari


  • aboomer silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    I am sorry for your loss and pain. It is hard to lose a soul-mate, or any loved one - especially so, during the holidays.
    Wonderful heartfelt write. Full of the loss and lonliness of an empty holiday. My prayers/thoughts/best wishes to you.

    thank you for the lovely entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • rbruce gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    I feel for your loss. Time will help you as you do get your life back on track. Expresses sentiments I too have felt in similar circumstances/

    • amysticwriter silver member
      November 25, 2008
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      thanks friend, I pray daily for strength and understanding...peace to you as well...

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