Across the Stars
Memories search for thee
Eternal waves of loves infinity
My soul has been bonded
to you
And you to me
Forever My love
Melding in emotions slipstream
through heartbeats
I knew you yesterday
I knew you tomorrow
I knew you before I was born
Warpspeed five nine
Shields up
Beam us up dear love
And we will trek boldly onward
Where no other emotion dares to go
following Loves Prime directive
A contest entry
- Eternal Love (Quote Prompt) by Sandygram.
1200 points, ended December 6, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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another take to the familiar theme with which you hide your words. As a fan, I found it quite joyful to read. Well Said. Best of Luck!
Respectfully,
Silent Hawk
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Now this one brought a smile. Great poem. Love how you went in a whole new direction with the prompt. Thank you for entering our contest. This was a pleasure to read this afternoon. Best of luck to you. Take care, Sandy
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you have done a great job on this, i mean it has a strong feel to it, the title fits, cause this is what to me being love struck feels like, keep it flowing
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Excellent
Aye, I'm a fan of STNG, and the original, of course, a fine take off, to be sure. You expressed your ideas with clarity. Thanks for sharing.
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