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Leave Me Breathless 2

Leave me breathless
Just hold on tight
And don't let me fall
For anything but you

And I'm not ready to go
But I'm not prepaired
To stay where I am
So just leave me
Just leave to make
Up my mind

Cause with you so close
All I can think of is you
And your breath is so warm
And is giving me life
Maybe you can save me
After all

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