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not to feel its dearth---

Tie the olive green festoons
Feel sigh  of relief from the routine noons
CHRIST  A  MUST must be root to your slogans

Santa will assist you to spread peace on the holy earth
Pray the Almighty to keep its quantity always to the brim's width
thus not allowing any  body , at any time , to feel its practical dearth

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  • penman gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.