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You And Your Money Drama...




You are doing well
not hurting at all
everything's paid for
having fun spending

I am so proud for you
and all you've accomplished
but every time we go out
I get to watch you shop

Buying things over-priced
like it's going out of style
Must be nice to have it
but you get way too wild

I gotta get this and that
knowing we're in a pinch
It's taking every dime
just to make ends meet

Why do you ask me
to go shopping with you
when I have to be the one
that goes empty-handed

You make me feel poor
and beneath you, at times
Sister, you can lose it all
as fast as you got it...


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  • vampedvixen
    December 8, 2008
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    Thank you so much for entering this in my contest. The economy is really crap these days and since I'm now unemployed, and my sister is a well paid teacher and doing really well, I can certainly relate to the poem. Great job! You took the prompt someplace I didn't imagine it going, and I think that's why I like this piece so much, it shows creativity!