If tomorrow never comes,
would you know how much
I love you today?
How much I loved you
yesterday?
If tomorrow never comes,
will you remember the
feel of my hand in yours?
Will you remember the
touch of my lips on yours?
Will you remember the
feeling you had,
the first time I said I love you...
Will you let the sun warm you,
or just hibernate in a cave,
and wish to not go on?
Will you let the wind,
find you and carry the hugs
from me to you?
What will you do,
if tomorrow never comes?
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Excellent
What a terrific write. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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Ooooooooooooh~
This is Precious Beautiful and Love the energy also the sentiments- Love is one Powerful Gift
and Love how You shared this too~
tomorrow is another day which has not come...yet... so relish what You have today
This swells the eyes
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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So pretty, and honest, and soul searching. A beautiful piece, almost like a quiet stream of conciousness. It has a lovely flow and feel to it. Another radiant piece from your pen. xxxx
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These have been in my thoughts for my tomorrow, did not come with my husband then my brother died we wonder so many things this is lovely it has so much love pour into it.
great job
love your sis brenda
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This Is Beautiful
Oh so much love you have for him. What a lucky guy and again I'm so sorry for your loss. You express your love in such a beautiful way in which you question his love for you. He loved you so much I can tell with all the love you continue to pour upon him. I just love you and your gift to write such beautiful poetry just amazes me. Thank you for sharing.
Wishing You Many Blessings
I've Missed You
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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nice...i cant write happy poems very good...great job
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Uplifting
Finally! A happy poem! In this hate-filled world, poems of love and happiness are always welcomed in my book. And you know what? It's original! Most times I read love poems, I think to myself "Wanna be how much 'I can't live without you will show up?' " But you stayed away from cliche, and did a decent job at writting a poem of love. Congrats.
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Thanks, I just through this one together
I may do another in a different way... We shall see.
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