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Movements of Life Inside

The heart is the master of how we live
He taps out the moments as to how we move
The will to keep on going from day to day.
The will to care where we must give.

The brain is the master who gives the heart the go
He does all of the recalling, as how we were taught
The reasoning to weigh the pros and the cons
The instinct to dodge or duck

The eyes see all we need to see
Often more the we need
The can see truth as it is shown
The still see into the past as a guide for today

The mind is the one who makes the judgements
If it is a yes or a no and which way to go
He has to reason with all that must connect
He is the one who makes us, in other eyes reflect

Without all of this
How can one recall life's all in all
Where to keep our treasures to warm us
Where to keep us going, and not let us stall

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  • Silent Hawk
    December 5, 2008

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    Wisdom Resides

    in five stanzas of your words. Wonderful thoughts pieced together that cover the subject well. Best of Luck!

    Respectfully,
    Silent Hawk


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    A wonderful and thoughtful poem you have penned for our contest. Very wise thoughts, written so well. Thank you for entering our contest. This was a pleasure to read this afternoon. Best of luck to you. Take care, Sandy