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Chalk white
Like medicinal
Coating fingertips
Gloves
Stained by nicotine
Streaking my clean windows
I just washed those
Why can't you respect me?
Oh, right:
You are me.
I wish you wouldn't put yourself down.

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  • Scyphon
    November 26, 2008

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    Very well done, I love the end. The last two lines were strong, having the pain come from yourself. We need not hurt ourselves


  • Tamera
    November 26, 2008
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    Very Fruedian. Having a strong message in a short write.