Romeo and Juliet,
Dance among the stars.
Lost in their own little world,
They dance alone,
Not caring that there is no music,
Only caring that they are together,
Holding each other.
Romeo and Juliet,
Their love is strong and true.
He'd cross a million miles just for her,
It took her time to see it,
But now she knows it's true.
Juliet, I can see,
Romeo is so in Love with you.
Author notes
For Romeo and Juliet, they know who they are.
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- Romeo and Juliet by my02U.
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Very nice!
You know, i just realized (and it's perfectly fine if this is totally off, you can yell at me if i'm wrong) that the "dance among the stars" bit (line 2) could refer to "Heaven" a.k.a. this is like a sequel... you know, they die, and then they meet again in the afterlife... sorry i'm not good at being politically correct but that's what i got out of it! anyway great write!
luv,
lovey
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This is beautiful
and yes, I can see it to.
They are cute together.
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